Monday, September 03, 2007


THE LAST TIDE

So this is my last tide
Of feelings that were
Numbed by a shallow, hollow pride
While you struggled to breathe
By my frozen side
I sought answers to
the questions that never died


So this is my last tide
With closed eyes
And a heart opened wide
I tried to be someone
Someone else whose eyes never dried
While you looked away and cried
You failed to gaze inside
I swear I tried
While you looked away and cried
I swear I tried
So this is my last tide
Yes, this is my last tide.

8 comments:

Astraeus said...

beautiful simply..
wont write too much..
the essence just dripped off ur words...

Anonymous said...

i keep coming bak to read more of you. n this one is one the best in recent times!

Gypsy said...

:'(

AbHiNaNdAN said...

@ anonymous

i appreciate ur fondness for wht i write...
but y shrowd it with anonymity??

Anonymous said...

wats there in a name?

AbHiNaNdAN said...

identity...
somthn u had no control over but u begin 2 get used 2 it n even like it nonetheless...

Anonymous said...

mayb ... but i'll pass

AbHiNaNdAN said...

ditto